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< Bu mesaj bu kişi tarafından değiştirildi Mysa -- 14 Aralık 2014; 0:35:29 >_____________________________ i7 9700K | H150i Elite Capellix | Rog Strix Z370-F | RTX 3070 Amp | Corsair Vengeance Rgb Pro 16GB | Samsung Evo | Evga Supernova G3 750W | Corsair Icue 465X | Corsair K70 Rgb Mk.2 | Razer Viper Mini | Corsair Void Pro RGB Wireless | Blue Snowball Ice | Asus VG259QM -
Tamamiyle hatalı tense kayması özne eksikliği anlam bütünsüzlüğü vb... Translate bile daha iyi çevirirdi _____________________________ Betrayer... in truth, it was I who was betrayed. Still, I am hunted. Still, I am hated. Now, my blind eyes see what others cannot. That sometimes the hand of fate must be forced!
Now, go forth. Unleash the Tides of Doom, upon all those who would oppose us. -
bi dk ilk 2 yorum yanlış oldu _____________________________ -
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Orijinalden alıntı: Kubilay
Tamamiyle hatalı tense kayması özne eksikliği anlam bütünsüzlüğü vb... Translate bile daha iyi çevirirdi
birazcık yardım etsen
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Gayet doğru ama bunu sen çevirmediysen hocan kuşkulanabilir.
Çünkü çeviri birazcık profesyonelce davranıyordu.
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Orijinalden alıntı: PeerNet*
hata falan yok
takam kafana
< Bu ileti mobil sürüm kullanılarak atıldı >_____________________________ -
Temel used to be a very successful captain. His success was known and appreciated by all sailors, but he used to have a strange habit. Every morning he used to open lock of a chest in his cabin carefully in order to read one paper removed from the chest. After reading the paper, he used to lock the chest suddenly. He didn’t use to say anything to anyone what there was in the chest. At a later time, Temel died. Because of that the wealth of Temel was the only chest, his all relatives thought that there was a big treasure in the chest or that paper was a treasure map, so they opened the chest curiously. In the chest, there was only that paper, which Temel used to read carefully every morning, and there was a writing on that paper which says: ‘right: starboard, left: port’.
ben böyle çevirdim ama birkaç hata olabilir
< Bu mesaj bu kişi tarafından değiştirildi fannyhamlin -- 14 Aralık 2014; 1:16:59 >_____________________________ -
Temel has been a succesful captain.All of seamans knows and win recognition his success.(Bu kısmı bu şekilde yazman daha doğru olur: His success was known by all seamens.) But he had a habit, every morning he opens the lock of a chest carefully in cabin,he reads a paper while taking from inside of the chest and then locks it immediately. Whoever asked him he didn’t tell anybody what is inside the chest. The time when Temel died came, All of relatives thinks it's a great treasure, or the paper which Temel reads every morning is a treasure map because the only wealth is his chest. They opened the chest curiously. In the chest there is only a paper which Temel was reading and writing in paper that:
-Right: Starboard, Left: Port.
Al dostum gördüğüm hataları değiştirdim ve gösterdim. Bazılarını kalınlaştırmadım okuyunca görürsün zaten.
< Bu mesaj bu kişi tarafından değiştirildi Guest-0F7B056BC -- 14 Aralık 2014; 1:30:09 >
< Bu ileti mobil sürüm kullanılarak atıldı >_____________________________
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Orijinalden alıntı: grkm1
Temel has been a succesful captain.All of seamans knows and win recognition his success.(Bu kısmı bu şekilde yazman daha doğru olur: His success was known by all seamens.) But he had a habit, every morning he opens the lock of a chest carefully in cabin,he reads a paper while taking from inside of the chest and then locks it immediately. Whoever asked him he didn’t tell anybody what is inside the chest. The time when Temel died came, All of relatives thinks it's a great treasure, or the paper which Temel reads every morning is a treasure map because the only wealth is his chest. They opened the chest curiously. In the chest there is only a paper which Temel was reading and writing in paper that:
-Right: Starboard, Left: Port.
Al dostum gördüğüm hataları değiştirdim ve gösterdim. Bazılarını kalınlaştırmadım okuyunca görürsün zaten.
Çok teşekkür ederim hocam
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Orijinalden alıntı: fannyhamlin
Temel used to be a very successful captain. His success was known and appreciated by all sailors, but he used to have a strange habit. Every morning he used to open lock of a chest in his cabin carefully in order to read one paper removed from the chest. After reading the paper, he used to lock the chest suddenly. He didn’t use to say anything to anyone what there was in the chest. At a later time, Temel died. As his all wealth was only the chest, his all relatives thought that there was a big treasure in the chest or that paper was a treasure map, so they opened the chest curiously. In the chest, there was only that paper, which Temel used to read carefully every morning, and there was a writing on that paper which says: ‘right: starboard, left: port’.
ben böyle çevirdim ama birkaç hata olabilir
en doğrusu bu bunu kullan
< Bu mesaj bu kişi tarafından değiştirildi SudaEriyenAspirin -- 14 Aralık 2014; 2:11:10 >_____________________________ Donunu düşüren kahraman olamaz
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