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Orijinalden alıntı: Yarr

Bazı hatalar var lütfen düzeltin .

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Orijinalden alıntı: mcandal

quote: Orijinalden alıntı: Yarr Bazı hatalar var lütfen düzeltin .

hataların nerede olduğunu belirtirmisiniz lütfen, ingilizcem pek iyi değildir de

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Orijinalden alıntı: Yarr

Bazı hatalar var lütfen düzeltin .

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Orijinalden alıntı: mcandal

I remember every Sunday I would sit there in the living room and watch football. I was only about 4 years old, and I sat there all day and watched the games. I never knew what was going on, but in someway found it fascinating. After every quarter of play I would request the score. Whoever my dad said was behind I would root for. I don’t know why , but I always liked the underdog.

We would always order pizza and wings after the first game ended. I was a little toddler and only ate about 3 wings and a slice of pizza, that was so much I felt like my stomach was about to explode. I then had to clean up the mess me and my dad made. I would then go into the living room to watch the end of the second game. We then would always go get ice cream. I always got a chocolate milkshake, my dad got a scoop of vanilla on a sugar cone. I never could drink it all, but I tried. When we were done we would go home for the 3rd game. I made it through the first quarter, and found myself waking up on the couch with the great smell of my grandmother’s pancakes sitting on the kitchen table.

This is one of my favorite childhood memories. Can you think of yours? Well when you get some time close your eyes and think if you had one chance to relive one memory that you have what would it be? And when you are thinking you will remember things that you never thought you would remember.


beyler yarın ingilizceden sınav oluyoruz ingilizceden ve bir soruda başımızdan geçen bir anıyı anlatmamız isteniyor bende bunu yazdım, eğer ingilizcesi iyi olan biri varsa yazıyı kontrol edebilir mi lütfen. herhangi bir hata varsa düzeltmem gerekiyor.

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Orijinalden alıntı: Aelin-uial

İlk paragraf benden.

Her pazar oturma odasında oturduğum ve futbol seyrettiğin günleri hatırlıyorum. Sadece 4 yaşındaydım ve tüm gün orada oturur oyunları izlerdim. Ne olduğuna dair hiç fikrim yoktu, yine de bunda beni etkileyen bir şey buluyordum. Her çeyrekten sonra sonucu sorardım. Babamın söylediği hevesimin hep gerisindeydi. (Buradaki cümleyi anlayamadım tam olarak bu yüzden yanlış çevirmiş olma ihtimalim yüksek.) Neden bilmiyorum ama hep ezilen taraftan hoşlandım.

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Orijinalden alıntı: A7X3DAYS

yeter be yeter , adam sizden insan gibi yardım istemiş sizin şu yaptığınıza bak yazık be yazık hepinize acıyorum , o sizden çevirmenizi istiyor yardım etminizi istiyor , siz ne utanmaz ne kişiliksiz insanlarsınız be

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Orijinalden alıntı: A7X3DAYS

yeter be yeter , adam sizden insan gibi yardım istemiş sizin şu yaptığınıza bak yazık be yazık hepinize acıyorum , o sizden çevirmenizi istiyor yardım etminizi istiyor , siz ne utanmaz ne kişiliksiz insanlarsınız be

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Orijinalden alıntı: Zetharos

quote: Orijinalden alıntı: mcandal I remember every Sunday I would sit there in the living room and watch football. I was only about 4 years old, and I sat there all day and watched the games. I never knew what was going on, but in someway found it fascinating. After every quarter of play I would request the score. Whoever my dad said was behind I would root for. I don’t know why , but I always liked the underdog. We would always order pizza and wings after the first game ended. I was a little toddler and only ate about 3 wings and a slice of pizza, that was so much I felt like my stomach was about to explode. I then had to clean up the mess me and my dad made. I would then go into the living room to watch the end of the second game. We then would always go get ice cream. I always got a chocolate milkshake, my dad got a scoop of vanilla on a sugar cone. I never could drink it all, but I tried. When we were done we would go home for the 3rd game. I made it through the first quarter, and found myself waking up on the couch with the great smell of my grandmother’s pancakes sitting on the kitchen table. This is one of my favorite childhood memories. Can you think of yours? Well when you get some time close your eyes and think if you had one chance to relive one memory that you have what would it be? And when you are thinking you will remember things that you never thought you would remember. beyler yarın ingilizceden sınav oluyoruz ingilizceden ve bir soruda başımızdan geçen bir anıyı anlatmamız isteniyor bende bunu yazdım, eğer ingilizcesi iyi olan biri varsa yazıyı kontrol edebilir mi lütfen. herhangi bir hata varsa düzeltmem gerekiyor.

''her pazar oturma odasında oturacağımı hatırlarım. ''

oldu o zaman biz kalkalım

edit: bir sürü would kullanmışsın. would'un will'in pastı olduğunu bilmiyor musun

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Orijinalden alıntı: A7X3DAYS

yeter be yeter , adam sizden insan gibi yardım istemiş sizin şu yaptığınıza bak yazık be yazık hepinize acıyorum , o sizden çevirmenizi istiyor yardım etminizi istiyor , siz ne utanmaz ne kişiliksiz insanlarsınız be

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Orijinalden alıntı: mcandal

quote: Orijinalden alıntı: Zetharos quote: Orijinalden alıntı: mcandal I remember every Sunday I would sit there in the living room and watch football. I was only about 4 years old, and I sat there all day and watched the games. I never knew what was going on, but in someway found it fascinating. After every quarter of play I would request the score. Whoever my dad said was behind I would root for. I don’t know why , but I always liked the underdog. We would always order pizza and wings after the first game ended. I was a little toddler and only ate about 3 wings and a slice of pizza, that was so much I felt like my stomach was about to explode. I then had to clean up the mess me and my dad made. I would then go into the living room to watch the end of the second game. We then would always go get ice cream. I always got a chocolate milkshake, my dad got a scoop of vanilla on a sugar cone. I never could drink it all, but I tried. When we were done we would go home for the 3rd game. I made it through the first quarter, and found myself waking up on the couch with the great smell of my grandmother’s pancakes sitting on the kitchen table. This is one of my favorite childhood memories. Can you think of yours? Well when you get some time close your eyes and think if you had one chance to relive one memory that you have what would it be? And when you are thinking you will remember things that you never thought you would remember. beyler yarın ingilizceden sınav oluyoruz ingilizceden ve bir soruda başımızdan geçen bir anıyı anlatmamız isteniyor bende bunu yazdım, eğer ingilizcesi iyi olan biri varsa yazıyı kontrol edebilir mi lütfen. herhangi bir hata varsa düzeltmem gerekiyor. ''her pazar oturma odasında oturacağımı hatırlarım. '' oldu o zaman biz kalkalım edit: bir sürü would kullanmışsın. would'un will'in pastı olduğunu bilmiyor musun

hocam yazıyı tam olarak kendim çevirmedim,bir internet sitesinde karşıma çıktı bende bunu kullanmayı düşünüyorum şimdilik

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Orijinalden alıntı: Yarr

Bazı hatalar var lütfen düzeltin .

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Orijinalden alıntı: mcandal

quote: Orijinalden alıntı: Zetharos quote: Orijinalden alıntı: mcandal I remember every Sunday I would sit there in the living room and watch football. I was only about 4 years old, and I sat there all day and watched the games. I never knew what was going on, but in someway found it fascinating. After every quarter of play I would request the score. Whoever my dad said was behind I would root for. I don’t know why , but I always liked the underdog. We would always order pizza and wings after the first game ended. I was a little toddler and only ate about 3 wings and a slice of pizza, that was so much I felt like my stomach was about to explode. I then had to clean up the mess me and my dad made. I would then go into the living room to watch the end of the second game. We then would always go get ice cream. I always got a chocolate milkshake, my dad got a scoop of vanilla on a sugar cone. I never could drink it all, but I tried. When we were done we would go home for the 3rd game. I made it through the first quarter, and found myself waking up on the couch with the great smell of my grandmother’s pancakes sitting on the kitchen table. This is one of my favorite childhood memories. Can you think of yours? Well when you get some time close your eyes and think if you had one chance to relive one memory that you have what would it be? And when you are thinking you will remember things that you never thought you would remember. beyler yarın ingilizceden sınav oluyoruz ingilizceden ve bir soruda başımızdan geçen bir anıyı anlatmamız isteniyor bende bunu yazdım, eğer ingilizcesi iyi olan biri varsa yazıyı kontrol edebilir mi lütfen. herhangi bir hata varsa düzeltmem gerekiyor. ''her pazar oturma odasında oturacağımı hatırlarım. '' oldu o zaman biz kalkalım edit: bir sürü would kullanmışsın. would'un will'in pastı olduğunu bilmiyor musun

hocam yazıyı tam olarak kendim çevirmedim,bir internet sitesinde karşıma çıktı bende bunu kullanmayı düşünüyorum şimdilik

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Orijinalden alıntı: Aelin-uial

quote: Orijinalden alıntı: mcandal quote: Orijinalden alıntı: Zetharos quote: Orijinalden alıntı: mcandal I remember every Sunday I would sit there in the living room and watch football. I was only about 4 years old, and I sat there all day and watched the games. I never knew what was going on, but in someway found it fascinating. After every quarter of play I would request the score. Whoever my dad said was behind I would root for. I don’t know why , but I always liked the underdog. We would always order pizza and wings after the first game ended. I was a little toddler and only ate about 3 wings and a slice of pizza, that was so much I felt like my stomach was about to explode. I then had to clean up the mess me and my dad made. I would then go into the living room to watch the end of the second game. We then would always go get ice cream. I always got a chocolate milkshake, my dad got a scoop of vanilla on a sugar cone. I never could drink it all, but I tried. When we were done we would go home for the 3rd game. I made it through the first quarter, and found myself waking up on the couch with the great smell of my grandmother’s pancakes sitting on the kitchen table. This is one of my favorite childhood memories. Can you think of yours? Well when you get some time close your eyes and think if you had one chance to relive one memory that you have what would it be? And when you are thinking you will remember things that you never thought you would remember. beyler yarın ingilizceden sınav oluyoruz ingilizceden ve bir soruda başımızdan geçen bir anıyı anlatmamız isteniyor bende bunu yazdım, eğer ingilizcesi iyi olan biri varsa yazıyı kontrol edebilir mi lütfen. herhangi bir hata varsa düzeltmem gerekiyor. ''her pazar oturma odasında oturacağımı hatırlarım. '' oldu o zaman biz kalkalım edit: bir sürü would kullanmışsın. would'un will'in pastı olduğunu bilmiyor musun hocam yazıyı tam olarak kendim çevirmedim,bir internet sitesinde karşıma çıktı bende bunu kullanmayı düşünüyorum şimdilik

would. used to anlamına da gelir.

I used to sit there in the living room. Bu bunu eskiden yaptığını ama artık yapmadığını niteler.

Yanlış anlamışım bu arada kontrol ediyorum hemen.